Första utkast till en "låt"

Svårt att hitta melodin eller rytmen bara, men ja..längre ska den eventuellt bli..

I wish for you to come and rescue me
from this place far off moon
where I don't want to be
but still,
if you did,
I would feel more confused than I do.

I try to stand tall without you.

I run, run, run
I'm running for my fucked up life
Towards unsecurity I continue to run
I'm blinded by all that's hidden

'cause we're equal in mentality
equal in our feelings
the same spirit divided in two
one of us is the other's angel when needed

I run, run, run
I'm running for my fucked up life
Towards unsecurity I continue to run
I'm blinded by all that's hidden

How can I make this right?